ClydeArk's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Don't Mess With Ghosts!]

Almost had a seizure.

Erhm.. that ended abruptly.

Aerodactyl responds:

good

[U: Submission Day Part 2]

I was waiting for the new one!

Started out a tad bit slow, but Mr. Killer's scene was worth the watch. lol

Blakant responds:

lol, look like mr.killer killed it :P

[I and J- Court (ep. 5)]

500,000$? lol

This is so random it's funny.

TheAnimationNetwork responds:

thank you

[Ransom!]

Great start!

I voted three mistakenly, but I meant a four. >> It's a really good start to flash if it's your first.

Hope you can improve and do better. I really didn't laugh, but I did find it funny. Keep it up.

zigilante responds:

Thank you! I hope I can improve as well! We'll do our best to make you laugh next time. :)

[Umk - Arcade Parody]

Too many errors.

Habian muchos errores de gramatica. Entiendo que el Ingles no es tu primer idioma, pero tal vez podias conseguir a un traductor? Bueno, para el proximo flash. Tambien querras hacer que el dialogo sea un poco mas lento. No pude leer un buen poco por que avanzaba muy rapido.

Mira, pues te traduci tu comentario de autor para que se entienda mejor:

THIS PARODY IS A REMAKE OF AN OLD MORTAL KOMBAT PARODY I MADE BACK IN 2006 FOR MYSELF. BECAUSE IT GAINED FAME ON YOUTUBE, I DECIDED TO MAKE A VERSION FOR THE ENGLISH AUDIENCE AND NEWGROUNDS. I HOPE YOU ENJOY IT.

Espero que no te ofendi, pero a golpes se aprende, no? lol

Tal vez te pueda yo ayudar en alguna traduccion si la necesitas. Puedo leer y escribir en los dos idiomas bien.

DegaisterStudio responds:

MUCHAS GRACIAS POR TU CRITICA ^^.. TE VOY A TENER EN CUENTA PARA MIS ANIMACIONES FUTURAS! ^^

[U: First Thing Game]

I lol'ed

Don't stop. KEEP THEM COMING MAN. lol

Blakant responds:

Gonna submit another shorty tomorrow! :D thx

[The Kirby Collab]

OMG

This is full of so much win. I might be biased because I love Kirbi, but DAMN. lol

FlashfireEX responds:

D

[Super Zombie World Part 1]

Hilarious, but could have been executed better.

Even though some of it was predictable, I couldn't help but to laugh. You had an over all great story, but some parts could have been done better.

To name a few:

*Credits. The credits should wait until the end. Although not critical to the plot, the characters participating were already known. You revealed information unnecessarily. While I'm on this, you may want to make the transition a little slower. I'm usually a fast reader, but I could barely catch who was voicing which character because the credits moved so fast. I noticed that there was a person who did the voice for more than one character and you put both characters in different slides. Maybe for the next time you have a similar situation you can make the slide so it says "John Baker as 'Mario' and 'Luigi'" In this case John Baker is your voice actor, and Mario and Luigi his parts.

*Some of the voices didn't really match the character. Toadsworth for example. He only looked old. The voice actor who played him obviously wasn't the right choice. Not bashing the guy, but I'm sure he could have played another part
better.

*Emotion. In a few instances some of the lines lacked the appropriate emotion. Fear for example, was conveyed with a dull tone.

I hope you continue your work though!

MurderMysteryMan responds:

Okay, thanks for the critique :)

(I know I'm not saying much as a reply, but there's not much to be said. I can't disagree with what you're saying. I really appreciate it though.)