ClydeArk's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[N.G. Showdown]

All my 5's are belong to you.

Teach me how to animate oh creator of all that is good!

[Red Riding Hood]

Chilled my heart.

I remember seeing this long ago, and remember the ending quite well, but I couldn't help but to feel my the air around me drop in temperature. You are quite the genius.

[The Kirby Collab]

OMG

This is full of so much win. I might be biased because I love Kirbi, but DAMN. lol

FlashfireEX responds:

D

[Super Zombie World Part 1]

Hilarious, but could have been executed better.

Even though some of it was predictable, I couldn't help but to laugh. You had an over all great story, but some parts could have been done better.

To name a few:

*Credits. The credits should wait until the end. Although not critical to the plot, the characters participating were already known. You revealed information unnecessarily. While I'm on this, you may want to make the transition a little slower. I'm usually a fast reader, but I could barely catch who was voicing which character because the credits moved so fast. I noticed that there was a person who did the voice for more than one character and you put both characters in different slides. Maybe for the next time you have a similar situation you can make the slide so it says "John Baker as 'Mario' and 'Luigi'" In this case John Baker is your voice actor, and Mario and Luigi his parts.

*Some of the voices didn't really match the character. Toadsworth for example. He only looked old. The voice actor who played him obviously wasn't the right choice. Not bashing the guy, but I'm sure he could have played another part
better.

*Emotion. In a few instances some of the lines lacked the appropriate emotion. Fear for example, was conveyed with a dull tone.

I hope you continue your work though!

MurderMysteryMan responds:

Okay, thanks for the critique :)

(I know I'm not saying much as a reply, but there's not much to be said. I can't disagree with what you're saying. I really appreciate it though.)

[The Child That Smelt Odd]

For the effort.

I'm aware of how animation can be bothersome and you seem to have a grasp for it so I'll give it a 5. The content I didn't enjoy so much, but that's probably because it was a little too slow for my violent tastes(influenced by the media of course 8D).